Showing posts with label Critical Writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Critical Writing. Show all posts

Sunday, 29 September 2013

A London

These thoughts came about after reading an article at The New York Time on 'Useful Critiques'. On the article, Jonathan Klein, chief executive of Getty Images, expresses that:
    «Anytime someone came to me to show me their work, I would critique it. I would almost behave like a schoolteacher — my mother was a teacher — and bring out the metaphorical red pen. And what I didn’t appreciate at the time is that before you mess around the edges, you’ve got to say to yourself, “Am I going to make this significantly better, or am I going to make it only 5 or 10 percent better?” Because in fiddling over the small stuff, you take away all the empowerment. Basically it no longer becomes that person’s work. And after a while, those people get into the habit of giving you incomplete work, and then you have to do it for them.»
A couple of months ago I have read a critique, written by a foreign critic, from Croatia, regarding a body of work in which someone that I know had a major participation. It finishes with this lines: «The performance is composed of an international team of mostly high-quality performers from Croatia, Austria, Hungary, Great Britain and Slovenia ... while the announced Croatian dancer Sven Bahat unfortunately got a poor substitute.» [Predstavu tako čini međunarodna ekipa mahom kvalitetnih izvođača iz Hrvatske, Austrije, Mađarske, Velike Britanije i Slovenije ... dok je najavljivani hrvatski plesač Sven Bahat nažalost dobio slabiju zamjenu.]

My question is, how can the reviewer, Jelena Mihelčić, suggest that the "poor substitute" was not the best substitute for "the announced Croatian dancer", when, firstly, as the word 'substitute' implies - a person or thing acting or serving in place of another - and, when, secondly, the reviewer is making a comparison between two performers/dancers, but there wasn't, however, any thing to compare with. The "announced Croatian dancer" was 'announced', but he did not performed. Not even rehearsed! So there is nothing to compare, even to mention!

Setting aside the semantic debate, let’s try to understand what that underlying reality is. To what for is this announcement all about. Unless the author of this words knows something more about the performance piece than me - and believe me, she doesn't; or, instead, she is just being a kiss-ass. Which for a critic - someone who professionally has o maintain an analytical distance from what is being criticised -, or whatever she might call herself, is not the best professional predication. Unless she is writing as a PR manager while working for the "announced Croatian dancer"!

Fiddling around the edges allows the "artist", i.e. "the announced Croatian dancer", to get away with things; it doesn't help him, or her, to reach success. Because, "after a while, those people get into the habit of giving you incomplete work, and then you have to do it for them." And, believe me, again, you might know how to write; but you don't know how to dance.

Friday, 5 July 2013

Ibrahim El-Salahi: A Visionary Modernist

Ibrahim El-Salahi
A Visionary Modernist
Tate Modern

Ibrahim El-Salahi was born in 1930 in Omdurman, Sudan. Studied painting at the School of Design in Khartoum from 1949–52. El-Salahi left his home country in 1954 on a government scholarship to study painting and calligraphy at the Slade School of Fine Art in London. Returned to Sudan in 1957, where he became a key member of the ‘Khartoum School’ – a group of artists developing a new visual vocabulary to reflect the distinctive identity of the newly independent nation. The ‘Khartoum School’ was one of the most active contributors to the growth of modern art in Africa. El-Salahi’s art offers profound possibilities for understanding African and Arab modernisms and repositioning them within the context of a broader, global modernity. Throughout the 1960s and early 1970s, El-Salahi travelled to the United States and participated in the Mbari Artists and Writers Club in Ibadan, Nigeria. He led delegations of Sudanese artists to two historically significant gatherings: the Black Arts Festival in Dakar in 1966, and the Pan-African Arts and Cultural Festival in Algiers in 1969. In 1972, El-Salahi returned to Khartoum to take a post as Director General for Culture at the Ministry of Information. The following year he became Undersecretary, a tenure that ended abruptly on 8 September 1975 when he was accused of anti-government activities and held without trial at the infamous Cooper Prison for six months and eight days. After this experience, El-Salahi left Sudan to live in Doha, Qatar. Since 1998, El-Salahi lives in Oxford, but his memories and experiences of contemporary Sudan remain a constant part of his artistic practice. (from the Tate Modern website) (the artist is present)